This email is to junior colleague to help to find Intern position.
Hi! xxxx,
Did you get a
job offer from xxxx?
If not, I can help you to to apply to my previous company, xxxx design firm.
I saw that you researched Sushi samba restaurant for your thesis.
xxxx design firm designed the restaurant and I had worked there until last year.
If you are
interested in applying to them for intern position, I can refer you to HR.
Then, I would like to recommend you to rearrange your portfolio
focusing on hospitality and retail works.
Also, I suggest to change your resume, because It's hard to
read vertically arranged white text with gray background.
Reviewer will look
through everything in short time.
You need to
consider how your portfolio is presented impressively at a glance.
I think less text
and powerful visual images would be helpful.
And, if you have
some 3D works, please include them to your portfolio, too.
They keep looking for designer who is good at 3D works.
Please let me know, if you need anything I can help you.
Thanks,
Best,
Najung
Can you make the third paragraph more concise? For example, 1st and 4th and 5th sentence can be combined. Also, 3D work too...It is all one idea.
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ReplyDeleteRevised the third paragraph:
ReplyDeleteThen, I would like to recommend you to revise your portfolio focusing on hospitality and retail works with less text and strong images.
If you include 3D works, it might be helpful, too.
Also, I suggest you to change your resume layout and color in order to get better readability.
Very good. In the first paragraph, I would first mention strong images and then less text. How about...Additionally, it might be helpful to include 3D works.
ReplyDeleteDo not forget to bring a hard copy of anything you want me to check.
Nice work
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