Homework_2nd week_Email

This email is to junior colleague to help to find Intern position.

Hi! xxxx,

Did you get a job offer from xxxx?

If not, I can help you to to apply to my previous company, xxxx design firm.

I saw that you researched Sushi samba restaurant for your thesis.

xxxx design firm designed the restaurant and I had worked there until last year.

If you are interested in applying to them for intern position, I can refer you to HR.

Then, I would like to recommend you to rearrange your portfolio focusing on hospitality and retail works.

Also, I suggest to change your resume, because It's hard to read vertically arranged white text with gray background.

Reviewer will look through everything in short time.

You need to consider how your portfolio is presented impressively at a glance. 

I think less text and powerful visual images would be helpful.

And, if you have some 3D works, please include them to your portfolio, too.

They keep looking for designer who is good at 3D works.

Please let me know, if you need anything I can help you.

 
Thanks,

Best,
Najung

Writing 2nd week_for review

This writing is about my project description.
I would like ask you to review and would be happy to have any comments.

One of the Minneapolis-St Paul airport projects, which I designed at ICRAVE, was completed.

Minibar's concept was inspired by Minnesota nature and it creates comfort and fresh zone with contemporary design language. As a central focal point at the airport hold room, the centered free standing bar wrapped with custom mosaic glass tiles with green, yellow and white and it creates sculptural looking. Floating concave canopy with fiberglass panels reflects greenery patterns from bar and floor. 

The experience of space could make you inside another world at the airport. It would be different when you are sitting inside the bar from looking at the bar outside. Opening between the bar and canopy allows to see your gate and outside of window, so you can keep to watch your gate and flight status. Also, iPads for ordering food and browsing the web, and charging stations at every seat provide more convenience to airport users.

I wanted people could enjoy their time and experience special moment at the bar while waiting to board. I hope I can sit at the bar sometime soon and want to see how people experience this space.

Construction photo ©OTG Management

Homework 2nd week- Email_Re-write_Najun...

Hi! XXXX,

I hope you are doing well.

I would like to recommend Arch and Colonnade for your event.
Here is color, size and pricing information. 

Type	Colors	Size	Pricing: 7days rental (sales tax, shipping not included)
Arch	Red, cobalt blue (popular colors) white, yellow, paprika orange, avocado green	10’w x 10’h x 6’d	$567 each
Colonnade	White, red, neon orange, neon pink, neon green	9'h	$381 each

 
Also, the attached specs of Arch and Colonnade are for more detailed information. 

If the items work for your event, please send me floor layout or dimensions of the space. Then, we can provide better suggestions for you.

I would be happy to help you if you have any questions. 

Thanks,

Homework - Email Re-write 1st draft Kwan

Subject: [Regarding the Arch and Colonnade ] Hi XXX

How are you?

We recommend you Red or Cobalt Blue Arches. However if  you prefer other colors, there are some other choices: White, Yellow, Paprika Orange or Avocado Green.

For the Colonnade, you can choose these colors: White, Red, Neon Orange, Neon Pink or Neon Green.

This is the price of Arch and Colonnade below:

Description	Duration	Price
Arch (10'w x 10'h x 6'd)	7days rental include sales tax and shipping	$567
Colonnade (9'd)	7days rental include sales tax and shipping	$381

Could you let us know your floor layout? I think we can help you better if we know more about your space.

Please let us know if you have any question.

Thanks.