TO: District #777 Wholesalers
RE: Cisco Quick Marts
Don Kemsak, marketing director, has approved the our new decorative slogan banners for Labor Day. In addition, between August 6th-September 4th we have been authorized to use 12-pack displays. The preferred display is either block or circular
Please work with your managers to secure proper floor space and utilizes banners accordingly and call if you have any questions regarding this opportunity.
Thank you and good selling,
Natta Bottomliner
This draft is much better.
ReplyDeleteIn the first paragraph, I would start with the main point. Don authorized the building of our 12-pack displays in his stores.
Then you could use bullets to emphasize what he authorized and what he prefers. I would move the information regarding the decorative slogan banners down next to the block and circular displays.