Dear Wholesalers,
I want to give you
good news that, Don Kemsak, marketing director of Cisco Quick Marts, has
authorized our family 12-pack displays starting August 6 and continuing through
September 4.
Mr. Kemsak has
approved the use of our new slogan banners. To take advantage of this opportunity,
It can be better to use our full array of Labor Day decorative banners. Also, Mr.Kemsak
stated that he prefers either block or
circular displays in his Cisco Quick Marts.
I recommend you to work
with your individual store managers, secure the proper floor space,utilize the
banner material available and consider the Don’s preference about displays.
If you have any questions
, please do not hesitate for calling me.
Thank you and good
selling
Notta Bottomliner
District Manager,#777
It is pretty good.
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