Sunday, July 7, 2013

Homework_3rd week_Memo#2_rewrite

MEMORANDUM

TO: Ed Ditter
FROM: Ike Cantwright
DATE: 2 May
SUBJECT: Rescheduling marketing meeting

Hi! Ed,

I would like to reschedule our marketing meeting on the 20th instead of the 19th, because I need to stop by St. Louis for the satellite project after the National Sales Conferece and might not be back until the 19th.
Please let me know your availability on the 20th or any other date you prefer.

I'm looking forward hearing from you soon.

Thanks,

Best,
Ike

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5 comments:

  1. marinaJuly 8, 2013 at 9:21 PM

    Make the first sentence clear by proposing the date to meet, and then explain the reason why you cannot come.

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  2. NajungJuly 9, 2013 at 11:20 AM

    TO: Ed Ditter
    FROM: Ike Cantwright
    DATE: 2 May
    SUBJECT: Rescheduling marketing meeting on the 20th, May

    Hi! Ed,

    Can we reschedule our meeting on the 20th, May?
    I might not be back until the 19th considering the satellite project.
    Please let me know what is the best for you.

    Thanks,

    Best,
    Ike

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  3. UnknownJuly 15, 2013 at 8:52 AM

    Short and to the point nice work

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  4. marinaJuly 16, 2013 at 9:06 PM

    I would add one more sentence about the National Sales Conference. Very good.

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  5. NajungJuly 20, 2013 at 2:26 PM

    The 3rd draft
    TO: Ed Ditter
    FROM: Ike Cantwright
    DATE: 2 May
    SUBJECT: Rescheduling marketing meeting

    Hi! Ed,

    Can we reschedule our meeting on the 20th, May?
    I supposed to be back by 18th from the National Sales Conference.
    But, I might not come back until the 19th considering the satellite project.
    Please let me know what is the best for you.

    Thanks,

    Best,
    Ike

    ReplyDelete

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