To: Ed Ditter
From: Ike Cantwright
Date: 2 May
Subject: Marketing Meeting Reschedule
Hi Ed!
How are you?
I need to reschedule our meeting, as I have to stop off in St. Louis to talk about the Satellite Project, on the way back from the National Sales Conference.
So, how about the 20th?
Let me know if that would work for you.
All the best,
Ike
On my way back ,
ReplyDeleteI would start with How about the 20th...Write another sentence...On the way back from the National Sales Conference... It is not clear as it is. Nice work.
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